Antigone Cadmus

Jetpack -- Duuuude! I totally meant pursuing. *smacks self* Well, according to my spell check, perusing is a word, although I've never hear it used. ;) Thanks a lot! That ...

Thanks a ton, Camille (can I call you that?) and Kara! This is the prologue I wrote when I was eleven. xD After several months of procrastination, I'm actually writing ...

Have you tried any Jane Austen?

Hmm. Thank ye very much, April. :) I'm not quite sure I see the fragments you're talking about... But thanks again. :) An edited version will be up shortly.

It's just the standard combination of English and Latin we've come to know and love. The letter k kind-of existed in Greek, but the Romans did not have it. So, ...

No, Kronos is the correct GREEK spelling. The problem is, Athena is a Latin/English-tized spelling. If he wanted all of his names to seem Greek, he would have called Athena ...

Didn't you post this in Fantasy Fiction? I remember reviewing it... In the futrue, feel free to have a moderator move a piece to another sub-forum for you. Best, Antigone

Lily Moore -- I completely agree with everything you said. I'm well aware that the poor abused child card is played a bit to often. But I felt it would ...

You are so epic. --Antigone Psh, you know I can't review poetry.

Peanut, darling! Shrill is a verb. It's fine Jon. :wink: I'll review this (eventually). Right after exams, probably.

Daaanng, Snoink. :shock: Thanks a lot! Rosey: The names differ a lot in mythology. Not only do characters have different epithets, but the myths were passed down differently. It's like ...

Wow! Thanks a lot, April! I'm glad to know you liked it. Yeah, I thought I might be over-doing it with the choppiness, but... I think I'll keep it. And ...

Back! Meh. Mars has taken most of my nit-picks, and since most of your problems in here were repeated, I'll give you an overall. I find they can be just ...

You aren't being demanding at all! Afterall, I'm an instructor. :wink: That's what I'm here for! Bad choice of words...I know. O_o Not that I've been in the most lucid ...

Hey again! So you wanted me to elaborate. You had good points, especially on the description (though now I feel conflicted, because a previous reviewer suggested I needed more description, ...